Chapter 1: The False and Cruel One Page 17

8th Nov 2017, 9:00 PM in Chapter 1: The False and Cruel One
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Chapter 1: The False and Cruel One Page 17
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theheirtoilium 8th Nov 2017, 9:00 PM edit delete
theheirtoilium
For starters this week, I'm so glad I actually took the time to proofread while compiling these here notes. Aside from some really blatant spelling and grammatical errors, Lavidicus (Mnason...you know, the guy in the hood) sounded like he was related to the Hulk. But, now about this page. For the most part, I am satisfied with it, I really like the flow of the body in panel one, and the leaning back in panel 5. However, Lavidicus does look a tad bit rigid in the second panel. I also feel like I could have added more detail into the sack of grain, but I didn't want to overload the page with too much detail.

And now for the commentary and insight...Could the beggar have already figured something out about the main character that even he doesn't know. Seems to be that way. I'm trying to be very deliberate with my words that the characters speak, and that does actually serve a purpose. However, see you next week.
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